SPINNERS!
Kia Ora,
A fidget spinner is a Device that keeps spinning. They have only been popular in Gilberthorpe school for only this term. I am Opposed to Cons*We had to write a story about a Persuasive fidget spinner writing I chose Cons (No) and my Writing I think fidget spinners should not be allowed at school because....... They are distracting, noisy and you could loose it, other people might have the same and you might want a turn on someone fidget spinner and you might cause an argument and it might get taken off you!!!!! They are also expensive
other people adding onto mine: they might get stuck in your hair and break if they are plastic, you can lose them while you are playing,
!!!So do not bring fidget spinners!!!
Hi Emalea kaunteya here. I like how you said that fidget spinners should not be at school. I also agree with that but there was a little problem when you said that we could lose it instead you said that you could loose it. Didn't you mean lose. Nice job anyway. Bye.
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