I think the wolf is guilty because...

This is a story that I made up for writing for the past week it has been very fun I like doing things like that. We had to write a persuasive paragraphs. Also we read a story and we had to think if the wolf is guilty or not I think he is guilty. So here is my story...


I definitely think the wolf is GUILTY because he ate the pigs. ALIVE! They could have been startled by the building falling down, the two pigs did NOT have any injuries on them so the wolf is VERY GUILTY.  The wolf should very much go to jail because he even broke the pigs house down!

In addition to this, since he blew down the house he could have just calmed down and bought some sugar from the shop or just not made cake at all, or get one from the shop. That would be easier instead of all of that. And plus wolves DON’T EAT CAKE!! So how could he not be guilty.

Another reason he is quite obviously guilty is  you can never trust anyone or anything with sharp sharp teeth!  The wolf is actually the BIG BAD WOLF because he appears in another story like Little Red Riding Hood and he dresses up in human clothes and eats the grandma too! So that was a very bad idea.

I know the wolf is clearly GUILTY. He also did not die from the pigs he died from climbing down the chimney and got boiled, but… apparently the pigs tried to boil him alive but the pigs DID NOT! They were probably just cooking soup and the wolf ruined it.  

Without a doubt as you can see the wolf is definitely GUILTY!

This was all over some bag of SUGAR!!!

Fidget Spinner Persuasive Writing

SPINNERS!

Kia Ora,

A fidget spinner is a Device that keeps spinning. They have only been popular in Gilberthorpe school for only this term.  I am Opposed to Cons

*We had to write a story about a Persuasive fidget spinner writing I chose Cons (No) and my Writing I think fidget spinners should not be allowed at school because....... They are distracting, noisy  and you could loose it, other people might have the same and you might want a turn on someone fidget spinner and you might cause an argument and it might get taken off you!!!!!  They are also expensive
other people  adding onto mine: they might get stuck in your hair and break if they are plastic, you can lose them while you are playing,
                                                 
                                             !!!So do not bring fidget spinners!!!