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Thursday, August 24, 2017

Fidget Spinner Persuasive Writing

SPINNERS!

Kia Ora,
A fidget spinner is a Device that keeps spinning. They have only been popular in Gilberthorpe school for only this term.  I am Opposed to Cons

*We had to write a story about a Persuasive fidget spinner writing I chose Cons (No) and my Writing I think fidget spinners should not be allowed at school because....... They are distracting, noisy  and you could loose it, other people might have the same and you might want a turn on someone fidget spinner and you might cause an argument and it might get taken off you!!!!!  They are also expensive
other people  adding onto mine: they might get stuck in your hair and break if they are plastic, you can lose them while you are playing,
                                                 
                                             !!!So do not bring fidget spinners!!! 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Emalea kaunteya here. I like how you said that fidget spinners should not be at school. I also agree with that but there was a little problem when you said that we could lose it instead you said that you could loose it. Didn't you mean lose. Nice job anyway. Bye.

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