School should finish at 1pm

For writing we are doing persuasive writing and we had choices and I chose to do school should finish at 1 because I get tired as I said in my story. So here you go.......

School should finish at 1pm

I 100% think school should finish at 1pm because we work so hard and I am always tired in afternoon after all of the work we do and running around at breaks I always get tired and I feel like I want to go home. Another reason is we stay and work hard at school for 7 whole hours plus it seems so long, 9 to 3 and some people come to school at eight or seven! So they have to stay later than anyone else.

Also school use to finish at two forty five and now it is three! That is even longer. Some people don’t want to stay at school for that long but they have to. Like I do. If there parents work they could just have free time and wait at school and have fun or go to a friends house until there parents get back.  

Since I think we should finish at 1pm we would have to have shorter play though but I don’t really care because we could go home and do anything we want so then it is sort of like morning tea and lunch. So we would have to have 15 minutes instead of 30 for morning tea and for lunch the normal time because we go home at lunch.

I think we should have a vote, I think lets finish at 1pm on the dot.

I think that I could work faster next time or write bigger paragraphs.

Bye. I hoped you liked it.

My Journal-Favorite sport

Hey for writing we have a Journal in our drive it has all different sorts of things to write. Today I choose Favorite Sport I like to do two things which is my favorite things. So here it is................

 



Next time I would like to do better at a description for my writing or write more next time.

Byeee 

I think the wolf is guilty because...

This is a story that I made up for writing for the past week it has been very fun I like doing things like that. We had to write a persuasive paragraphs. Also we read a story and we had to think if the wolf is guilty or not I think he is guilty. So here is my story...


I definitely think the wolf is GUILTY because he ate the pigs. ALIVE! They could have been startled by the building falling down, the two pigs did NOT have any injuries on them so the wolf is VERY GUILTY.  The wolf should very much go to jail because he even broke the pigs house down!

In addition to this, since he blew down the house he could have just calmed down and bought some sugar from the shop or just not made cake at all, or get one from the shop. That would be easier instead of all of that. And plus wolves DON’T EAT CAKE!! So how could he not be guilty.

Another reason he is quite obviously guilty is  you can never trust anyone or anything with sharp sharp teeth!  The wolf is actually the BIG BAD WOLF because he appears in another story like Little Red Riding Hood and he dresses up in human clothes and eats the grandma too! So that was a very bad idea.

I know the wolf is clearly GUILTY. He also did not die from the pigs he died from climbing down the chimney and got boiled, but… apparently the pigs tried to boil him alive but the pigs DID NOT! They were probably just cooking soup and the wolf ruined it.  

Without a doubt as you can see the wolf is definitely GUILTY!

This was all over some bag of SUGAR!!!

Prototec

Hello Bloggers!
For maths we have done prototec and I did stage 6 and I got 97%  I got a few wrong next time  hope to get a higher percent. So this is my certificate..... 

This was fun and I think next time I should go to level 7 

Bye bye 

BULLY FREE WEEK

Hello bloggers this week is BULLY FREE WEEK me and my friends have been making a poster on google drawings for this week. I think Bully free week should be every week! We had to make it BIG BOLD & BRIGHT! By the way we are not actually bullying her in the photo it was just a play.


Bye Bye I think that is was quite fun doing this poster!

Don't Subtract Add!

Kia Ora guys
At the start of the year we were doing this slide about Don't Subtract Add! It was turning subtracting in to adding. so if people were just learning adding they can look at this slide that I worked on. It was quite easy and fun here it is... 

I hoped you learned something new today I know I did. Thanks for looking at my blog, blog you later!