School should finish at 1pm

For writing we are doing persuasive writing and we had choices and I chose to do school should finish at 1 because I get tired as I said in my story. So here you go.......

School should finish at 1pm

I 100% think school should finish at 1pm because we work so hard and I am always tired in afternoon after all of the work we do and running around at breaks I always get tired and I feel like I want to go home. Another reason is we stay and work hard at school for 7 whole hours plus it seems so long, 9 to 3 and some people come to school at eight or seven! So they have to stay later than anyone else.

Also school use to finish at two forty five and now it is three! That is even longer. Some people don’t want to stay at school for that long but they have to. Like I do. If there parents work they could just have free time and wait at school and have fun or go to a friends house until there parents get back.  

Since I think we should finish at 1pm we would have to have shorter play though but I don’t really care because we could go home and do anything we want so then it is sort of like morning tea and lunch. So we would have to have 15 minutes instead of 30 for morning tea and for lunch the normal time because we go home at lunch.

I think we should have a vote, I think lets finish at 1pm on the dot.

I think that I could work faster next time or write bigger paragraphs.

Bye. I hoped you liked it.